Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lake Mary

Self-made investor who is responsible for screening, learning & possibly funding new and innovative ideas in the Orlando market. Mitchell brings not only financial backing, but a long list of additional assets such as networking contacts, real world experience in select fields and a deep knowledge of Orlando and surrounding areas and demographics. I have a BS in Civil Engineering from the University of Florida. I work in the engineering/construction field as an estimator for large civil/highway projects providing in-depth cost analysis for various roadway projects. Investment Experience included Real Estate & New Business Start-Up. Interested in diversification into other areas. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory, Silent Status: Individual Investor

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Orlando

Business consultant for over 40 years with extensive experiences in private offerings. Have owned multiple businesses, some have achieved IPO Acquisition or Merger status.

$250,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Davie

I have been a successful real estate developer for the past 30 years and my interest is shifting to technology, medical and new invention that I can use my experiance to grow the company into a possible pre-IPO

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Naples

Providing capital through my contacts.

$1 to $50,000,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

39 year old married in South Florida. Have managed sales and other aspects of distribution in automotive and re-newable energy. Open to being a silent or active partner. Individual investors.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Riverview

Born in 1967 in Cincinnati Ohio. Received Bachelor of Science – Electronic Engineering degree in 1996 and Masters of Business Administration in 1999. Extensive experience in finance with a high level of knowledge in information technologies, sales and business development management. He has bought and sold many businesses while providing leadership and management that helps facilitate each company’s growth. He has run and managing all phases of a business life cycle, from needs assessment through business processes, implementation and dissolution if necessary.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Davie

I am a 31 year old married Business Man, Located in South Florida. I have experience in several industries, I currently own a Luxury Transportation Company and I am ready to take the next step towards growing my capital, and looking to help any one along the way.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Winter Park

Hi there! I am located in Winter Park FL with my Wife and Son. I have been in Transportation/3rd Party Logistics for over 11 years and that is what i currently do. I was a student-athlete throughout college and graduated with a Bachelors Degree. I have done a ton of investing in stocks so we feel it is time to expand our investment portfolio. I would prefer to be a silent partner, but I am open to hearing all opportunities and looking to invest anywhere from $25,000-$100,000. Whether it be food and beverage, retail, real estate, etc, I'm extremely eager to get going with another investment. Look forward to hearing more about what is out there

$25,000 to $100,000