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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I have over 32 years of experience in corporate advertising and marketing. Founder and president of a Michigan Avenue advertising and marketing agency specializing in advertising, promotion, and sales-incentive programs. Served a broad range of industries by creating successful selling models and up-sell strategies; developing, testing and refining integrated marketing strategies; and coordinating corporate communications and brand-identity programs for client companies. Created software that helped develop sales channels for the online services that automate the selling cycle, maximize clients' consumer facing business communications, consistently present clients' value proposition, and automatically initiate follow-up strategies.

$15,000 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

Looking to invest in businesses that are already profitable and need capital in order to scale. Digital marketing, Finance and Commercial Real Estate background. Can bring a lot of experience and value-add to the table.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Gainesville

20 plus yrs Construction Management Property Development. Group of private investors.

$1,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Orlando

Over 50 years old, business owner, married 35 years, Master's degree in Healthcare Administration. Owned several businesses in the past and currently. Silent business partner opportunity. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $75,000

Florida > Miami

Accounting background. Specialties include Auditing, Internal Controls, Corporate Governance, Risk Management, CCAR. I am looking for investment opportunities in Florida.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tamarac

Bachelors in finance, professional in car sales currently - #1 sales in company of many dealerships Mainly invested in retirement but looking for other opportunities to hustle and grow Involvement depends on sector. Individual investor but have family interested in making investments if it makes sense.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Longwood

37 Male, single. Current business professional working in operations management. Ten years of management over a staff of 30+. Anticipated involvement - hands on, silent.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Tampa

We represent the investment interests of a medium sized Asian country. Our primary interests lie in construction, development, real estate, community redevelopment and large project build out.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000