Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Marathon Shores

Realtor Broker and entrepreneur/investor since 1988.

$100,000 to $2,500,000

Florida > Orlando

A professional medical device executive in a fortune 100 company With multiple C-Suite connections. Expertise in quality improvements, cost efficiency, manufacturing, Engineering, strategy and project management/execution. PhD in polymer Physics. Masters in industrial and Medicinal Chemistry. Looking for investment opportunities with advisory/silent role. Some hands on possible based on investment

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

I’ve been a Registered Nurse for 15 years, have been in healthcare for nearly 30 years and currently working on my MBA. Congrats on everyone’s success during these difficult times. We are currently looking for owners who are interested in acquisitions or exit strategies who would be a good fit for our company’s portfolio. Our intentions are to use tools such as copy writing, funnel building, graphic design, etc to grow our newly acquired businesses and we are also open to absentee ownership. Looking forward to meetings in the future. Thank you.

$100,000 to $250,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am an individual investor, married, female, age 49. Pharmacist and Healthcare Management Specialist with 17 years of experience in the clinical laboratory field. My actual interest is investing in areas that promote and support the welfare of young people through education as a consequence of discrimination, mainly sex-based discrimination and related issues.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > North Lauderdale

Currently a manager at a call center for the past 11 years in tech support and customer service. Prior to now, occupied executive positions in both the government and private sector including holding the position of Vice President in the manufacture association as well as director in chambers of commerce. Graduate and participant of several post graduate training at universities and specialized financial institutions such as the EIB of Singapore Georgetown university and IMF in Washington. Was chairman and director at several government corporations and travel extensively to several countries to negotiate business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

I run my own successful rental business and am looking for other opportunities to fund my retirement. Not particular about industry, interested in anything with strong growth or expansion potential. Prefer to have minimal involvement but can help in the beginning if the investment is right.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Successful entrepreneur in the fresh food packaging industry marketing to fast food companies, supermarket bakeries and delis, Strong advocate of environmentally friendly opportunities. A keen understanding on how to add value to services and product in very competitive markets.

$10,000 to $20,000

Florida > Wellington

J.P. Morgan Analyst - 6 years Prudential Securities - 3 years Commercial Real Estate - 8 years Own & Operate Consulting Firm - 3 years

$100,000 to $10,000,000