Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Royal Palm Beach

Individual investor with experience in entertainment, hospitality, media, fully bilingual English and Spanish. Browsing opportunities to invest and grow.

$10,000 to $20,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 12yrs of in automotive sales and marking. I have been a top producer for years and been a major part of turning/improving dealerships. I have knowledge on: sales, DMS programs, loan underwriting, inventory control, auction buying, repo laws, non-refundable deposits, As Is laws, title work, and DMV requirements to open a dealership. I would like to invest with someone or a group focused on low overhead and wholesale style base pricing that is Buy Here Pay Here with 100% loan retention no selling of loans. Ideal areas orange county, seminal and Tampa area.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > St. Augustine

I'm single and living Jacksonville, Florida. I am a professional Mariner (currently chief engineer) and have been for the last 20 years with 9 years prior Military. Haven't invested in anything yet, but have some capital to make an investment with the right company, group or project. Looking to be a silent partner as an individual investor.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Gainesville

Serial entrepreneurs in Gainesville FL looking to help others. Equity stake preferred. Seeking opportunities in Jamaica as well.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Riverview

Previously started a company from the ground and ran it for three years. I had over 35 employees and recently sold it due to the recession. Money owed was not coming in fast enough.

$500 to $100,000

Florida > Cutler Bay

I am a real estate investor with many single family homes rented in Miami and Ocala, Fl. As those markets have slowed, I am looking for something new to invest only in, or perhaps invest and get involved minimally.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Cape Coral

MBA with over thirty years of professional business and technical experience. Project funding specialist. Have funding sources for debt and equity. Active in Assisted Living Facilities, Skilled Nursing Facilities, apartments, hotels, real estate developments and waste to energy plants.

$10,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Credit Investor Over a million dollars liquid and income over $200,000 yearly

$50,000 to $200,000